I have a friend that follows me around,
My muse,my sooth, my rhythm and blues.Every time I get down too low,
The guiding light has always been my shadow.
Sometimes my shadow grows dark-too dark,
Sometimes its darkness drowns me stark.
Out of the dark, into the light I walk,
And now the light seems like such as farce.
Sometimes its darkness drowns me stark.
Out of the dark, into the light I walk,
And now the light seems like such as farce.
But sadly those neon city lights,
Have pulled away many a men of might.
My shadow tried to pull me hither,
Yet blinded by light I find myself here.
My shadow tried to pull me hither,
Yet blinded by light I find myself here.
No muse, no sooth, no rhythm , no blues,
I am surrounded by faces of no use.
Yet the shadow will return in all its might,
All I have to do is kill the light.
I am surrounded by faces of no use.
Yet the shadow will return in all its might,
All I have to do is kill the light.
ha. i dont really believe in the muse...
ReplyDeletebut it is good to know that even when down low
we are not alone...our shadow surely never
leaves us....
There is always an interplay between the light and the shadow. It seems your poem expresses the journey that sometimes takes place between one and another.
ReplyDeleteSomehow the shadow and its darkness is the price we pay for light... Yet without the light there's there is only darkness.
ReplyDeletekilling the light does help you eliminate the shadows.
ReplyDeletelovely poem.
Very interest perspective and well penned.
ReplyDeleteZq
wonderful.
ReplyDeleteIt is good we can write our way through both dark times and light - such a release.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used darkness, light and shadows in this poem.
ReplyDeleteOne is being shadowed for better or for worse all the time. Getting out of the shell can be interesting!
ReplyDeleteHank
What a lyrical poem and a fantastic end...sometimes darkness can produce many a good thing...
ReplyDeleteLots of inspiration from darkness as well - from light. Liked the word play in your poem.
ReplyDeleteYes, why is it so much easier to write of the dark stuff? Maybe things like sorrow and anger demand more urgently for release.
ReplyDeletewhere there is dark there's light and the muse exists in both. the dark is the shadow of the light, cannot be separated. i write about this in my recent submittal
ReplyDeletegracias for sharing
there must be balance, if the light is too strong, its of no use, its just blinding
ReplyDeletehave a nice Tuesday
much love...
we need them both to discern clarity.
ReplyDeleteGotta keep the muse alive....keep writing Suyash!!
ReplyDeletealthough haunted, yet feel powerful enough to fight against the dark horse, which makes your poem beautiful and haunting.
ReplyDeleteLight and dark...we need both. Sometimes the balance is hard to achieve.
ReplyDeleteSounds like Batman.
ReplyDeletehahaha you just made my day XD
Deletethe first stanza is my favorite ~
ReplyDeleteLiked the way, you played with the conjoined yet opposing variables!
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