/*maroon is a combination of red and blue*/
He wakes from maroon dreams,
Into a world of summer autumn colour schemes.
The maroon man with his myriad moods,
At schemes ,chuckles, smirks,laughs and broods.
Red from blood once flowing,
From skin covering secret scars,
That now radiant and lambent are glowing,
Like battle scars on old guitars.
Blue from a music of oppressed art,
Blue borrowed scent, blue love and blue heart.
And somewhere Bukowski is sounding a rebel yell,
'Love......love is a dog from hell.'
As his eyes crave the sepia tint of nostalgia,
Blue and red blend , overpowering melancholia.
Hail muse! As nocturne sea brings foam to shore,
As maroon distills into purity from its ore.
City moves in chemically somnambulistic steps,
As poets of buildings large and small perplex.
Between these lines of cathartic ink,
Maroon turns into crimson,magenta or even pink.
He wakes from maroon dreams,
Into a world of summer autumn colour schemes.
The maroon man with his myriad moods,
At schemes ,chuckles, smirks,laughs and broods.
Red from blood once flowing,
From skin covering secret scars,
That now radiant and lambent are glowing,
Like battle scars on old guitars.
Blue from a music of oppressed art,
Blue borrowed scent, blue love and blue heart.
And somewhere Bukowski is sounding a rebel yell,
'Love......love is a dog from hell.'
As his eyes crave the sepia tint of nostalgia,
Blue and red blend , overpowering melancholia.
Hail muse! As nocturne sea brings foam to shore,
As maroon distills into purity from its ore.
City moves in chemically somnambulistic steps,
As poets of buildings large and small perplex.
Between these lines of cathartic ink,
Maroon turns into crimson,magenta or even pink.
What meaning we can take into those colors, sometimes the world is more like a big bruise...
ReplyDeleteAhh well that just makes it seem even more poetic doesn't it?
DeleteWell done with the maroon dreams melding into pink with Bukowski somewhere in between with the bruised guitar...!!
ReplyDeleteI like the enumeration of possibilities. But then, I am very fond of all shades of purple (combinations of red and blue).
ReplyDeletefrom scars, pains to purity and radiance...nicely put...
ReplyDeleteBut sometimes, combining all the colors, we may end up being colorless.
ReplyDeletePerhaps that's what it takes to get clarity - to have so much colour that it renders one colourless
DeleteWhat a wonderful riff this is - Like battle scars on old guitars - such a wonderful line..the whole portrait a sense of one who has lived..
ReplyDeleteThank you . My 9 year old acoustic guitar has a lot of those battle scars
DeleteBlue from a music of oppressed art,
ReplyDeleteBlue borrowed scent, blue love and blue heart.
Sigh.... beautiful lines....!!
Most of our lives are colored none more so than an artist searching for what his mind sees as he struggles to put it on canvas. Art is is not a game it is an ambition to paint dreams.
ReplyDeleteTrue at that. We only see the colours we use to paint our canvases.
DeleteA colorful & meaningful journey in words!
ReplyDeleteAs his eyes crave the sepia tint of nostalgia,
ReplyDeleteBlue and red blend, overpowering melancholia.
Wonderful lines. Good work man!
As his eyes crave the sepia tint of nostalgia,
ReplyDeleteBlue and red blend, overpowering melancholia.
Wonderful lines. Good work man!
Love the last two lines best, the sight of color being metamorphosed by experience and living.
ReplyDeleteThanks magaly! That's what in was going for
DeleteThis entire post made me smile....the Bukowski line, the sunflower soap, and the maroon man. It is nice to contemplate the colour maroon, which I have not thought about in a long time. Thanks for this.
ReplyDeleteThat's the thing about maroon ,it's not thought of so much , but it's pretty cool in it's own way
DeleteReally enjoyed this fascinating poem and especially loved how you ended it with pink!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
Such an intense and interesting portrait of the maroon man - in between colours.
ReplyDeleteyour poem is deep deep and had we thinking very serious, then the Van Gogh soap pic made me smile. I'm back in balance mode
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime today Suyash
much love...
That's how I balance seriousNess with ridiculousness
ReplyDelete"Like battle scars on old guitars." Intriguing and unusual image you use hear to ground the rest. And I love that "maroon" man sounds like "marooned man," one who sees in shades of blood and loss, some faded.I love, too, that Bukowski's line fits right in.
ReplyDeleteVery well executed, vivid imagery and details. You brought your maroon man to life,
DeleteElizabeth
Thanks Beth!
DeleteWell that ol man always knew what to say
DeleteLove the Bukowski reference so much :-)
ReplyDeleteA beautiful rainbow of colors!
ReplyDeleteah, you paint with a riot of colours.
ReplyDeletei liked what you said about battle scars on old guitars. it's really about serious music. liked the reference to bukowski. and his 'love is a dog from hell'.
Yeah , it's a poignant thing he said
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DeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Love the colors that you have imbued this piece with - as well as some wonderful wordsmithing.
ReplyDeletewordsmithing- now that's a word i really like
DeleteYour poem is a kaleidoscope of colours, dreamscapes and soundscapes. I fell into it like Alice, spinning and swirling. Cathartic indeed! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletewhy thank you for the wonderful alice in wonderland reference!
DeleteYes, this leaves its impression after being read...deliciously written and absorbing.
ReplyDelete'Love...love is a dog from hell'
ReplyDeleteHe's not wrong:)
You can say that again
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DeleteI adore this. I love the way it sounds when I read it aloud and I love the moods it evoked with your well chosen words.
ReplyDeleteWow. This was amazing. The last two lines give it a perfect ending.
ReplyDeleteSuch an intense and interesting portrait of the maroon man - in between colours.
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