I lost a
dream today,
Has anyone
seen it in my dismay?
My dream,
she mocks me now,
Reminding me of an unspoken vow
I loved my
dream like myself, but of purer clay,
In my arms,
my dream had promised to lay.
With my
dream I had a lover’s quarrel,
But now my
pillow is a long lost laurel.
My dream she
smiles a sardonic smile,
As I walk
another lonely mile.
Searching in
the skies was futile,
My dream had
sailed to an unknown isle.
But my sweet
dream,
You are but
a dream,
And
everything else is but a mean sleep.
The ending could not have been more perfect. Beautifully penned. Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the progression of this poem and you wrote it SO well. As I read it, I thought about how many of us may search for a lost dream, perhaps with futility.
I agree with Enigma about the ending. It IS 'perfect.'
A lovely way to portray that dream like that of a lost lover or maybe the other way around
ReplyDeleteExcellently conveyed - the empty arms (even in the world of sleep) is palpable.
ReplyDeleteOne would have wanted a wonderful dream! But some dreams may be mocking with the classic sardonic smile. Great lines Suyash!
ReplyDeleteHank
"You are but a dream,"..says it all...so poignant...
ReplyDeleteI know that walking in search of a dream.....and your closing is powerful, "everything else is but a mean sleep." Yet we must go on dreaming......
ReplyDelete"mean sleep" really well crafted image!
ReplyDeletesometimes we give in to daily life and later can't seem to remember the dreams we had.. and where they had gone.
ReplyDeletean unspoken vow,
ReplyDeletewow.
lovely dream wishes reflected.
Love the 'mean sleep'....now I have a name to those lost dreams and sleep deprived nights....nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
hahaha yup! Well done...
ReplyDeleteZQ
I don't mind waking up alone as long as a I have a sweet dream to sleep with.
ReplyDeleteI like the phrase 'mean sleep' too. As for dreams, none of mine love me any more; at least not enough to stay past waking. :)
ReplyDeletedreams can become real too. soon.
ReplyDeleteI love that when dreams are lost sleep becomes mean...this really resonated..dreams make our world far richer
ReplyDeleteGreat use of words with extra meanings. Love the visual i got reading it .
ReplyDeletefleeting, if you could only grasp it;
ReplyDeletethanks for linking in at my Sunday Lime,
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much love...