Someday I’ll fly,
Beyond the questions ‘what?’, ‘where?’and ‘why?’,
To where answers are only given with a sigh.
To where time does not fly by the bye,
A day,
A year,
Forever,
Are meaningless words to say.
Someday I’ll see,
Beyond the need to be,
Loved as to love.
Beyond the smell of burning clove,
As smoke
Takes away
All woes.
Someday I’ll write,
To not stub out ends of burning hearts by the night,
But to be one with beauty in all it’s might.
Someday I’ll pick up crumpled papers of poetry,
Rising
Beyond
Their blight.
Someday when the chords turn minor,
I shall not glance at the world’s pyre.
Even when I’m down to the wire,
I shall dance,dance,dance,
Through
The
Fire./* Check out this fine ditty whilst you read these words. There's also a rather rough take of a piece of music I think goes well with these words */
Would welcome, such a world, to live in, when it's time come, to be there. Until then, I must write my poetic verse, to heal myself and others.
ReplyDeleteWell until that someday , that's what all of us poets shall do. Really appreciate this response
DeleteTo not stub out ends of burning hearts by the night,
ReplyDeleteBut to be one with beauty in all it’s might...like that! Nicely done Suyash!
To not stub out ends of burning hearts by the night,
ReplyDeleteBut to be one with beauty in all it’s might... Wow suyash. Amazing play of words. Loved it
Thanks Saad :)
DeleteHope hope and hope.....we all need it and you give it beautifully!!
ReplyDeleteYes, let's dance through the fire!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you structured this.
thank you! i was experimenting around with structure
Deletecould feel the beat all through the poem specially in the last stanza...my favorite lines have already been quoted...thank you Suyash for a wonderful poetic experience :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong statement....someday hopefully all of those things will take place!
ReplyDeleteThis has an enchanting rhythm and cadence. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI think someday it will be so... maybe not for me, maybe not for all... but hopefully for most...
ReplyDeleteyeah that keeps humanity rolling
DeleteSuyash, I can't tell you how incredibly evocative and stunning this poem is!❤️ Your video was an added bonus!❤️ Kudos!
ReplyDeletethese were wonderful words, a lovely write. well penned into an etherealness of sorts.
ReplyDeleteThank you marco!
DeleteAh! That some day is eagerly awaited. The kind of journey you portray is so meaningful.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite bit would perhaps be, "Someday when the chords turn minor,/I shall not glance at the world’s pyre."
Powerful and quite evocative; it sounds like a chant. :-)
-HA
Thank you! I enjoyed writing those lines too
DeleteThis is lovely, especially dancing through the fire. So nice to read you, Suyash!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletedance through the fire and face your inhibitions...
ReplyDeletePrecisely so!
DeleteLove the mood of the poem... and the final (daring) dance.
ReplyDeleteDaring indeed
DeleteThis has an inescapable rhythm.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I meant it as a song
DeleteAn impactful and inspiriting piece. A pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the encouragement
DeleteKeep on dancing !
ReplyDeleteLike Bowie !
DeleteFantabulous!
ReplyDeleteThis does have a great sense of rhythm! Dancing to the beat of the piece--lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like the line about stubbing out hearts at night like cigarette butts, also the watercolors are cool.
ReplyDeleteAh yes, some day!!!Fantastic write
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Great meter and rhyme!
ReplyDeleteThank you I was looking to experiment with this one :)
DeleteSomeday indeed....love the flow and inspiring thought in this Suyash!
ReplyDeleteSo inspired, to rhyme minor with pyre!
ReplyDeleteMinor,pyre do indeed inspire
DeleteThe repetition of 'Someday' lends a wistful tone to the poem. Great work with the form.
ReplyDeleteSomeday
ReplyDeleteI feel like bursting into song
" there's a place for us///da da da place for us
Smiles
could feel the beat all through the poem specially in the last stanza...my favorite lines have already been quoted...thank you Suyash for a wonderful poetic experience :)
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