tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post302361914649642878..comments2023-09-01T03:36:53.616-07:00Comments on RecluseMuse: Reaching/LeavingSuyashJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-79730554937203133322019-03-13T21:29:10.542-07:002019-03-13T21:29:10.542-07:00Exactly this. Absolutely correctExactly this. Absolutely correctSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-29103472041327307592019-03-11T12:25:51.281-07:002019-03-11T12:25:51.281-07:00A never ending affair between the observer you and...A never ending affair between the observer you and the participant you...Sharathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07228253656164841356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-24274506224170577562019-03-11T07:47:46.838-07:002019-03-11T07:47:46.838-07:00A quandary.It will resolve with time.A quandary.It will resolve with time.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-6971185889845510302019-03-11T06:53:24.589-07:002019-03-11T06:53:24.589-07:00Alas, you won't know until time has passed. Me...Alas, you won't know until time has passed. Meanwhile, a very evocative write.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-15634202424058194372019-03-11T06:21:50.498-07:002019-03-11T06:21:50.498-07:00more questions than answers, isn't it?
loved t...more questions than answers, isn't it?<br />loved the rhymes you used. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-73114933867202010862019-03-11T02:45:24.305-07:002019-03-11T02:45:24.305-07:00Like 'apples gone bad..." "Fading li...Like 'apples gone bad..." "Fading like sea foam..." Vivid writing Suyashscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-29332565364437551412019-03-11T01:13:07.582-07:002019-03-11T01:13:07.582-07:00Ah, someone's sudden absence can leave us with...Ah, someone's sudden absence can leave us with these questions and such ways to reach out for answers may fall short of getting any sense of closure. I really liked your rendered emotions and that "foam/honeycomb" near-rhyme. A very effective write, Suyash! :-)Anmol (HA)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02427056865589377093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-65915597361756115502019-03-10T19:32:55.160-07:002019-03-10T19:32:55.160-07:00"I saw you pack, words that were had,
Into su..."I saw you pack, words that were had,<br />Into suitcases of clothes and apples gone bad." Love this--not the act, but the image. The event this poem recognizes and questions is a too common one, and your words move me.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-27748323268488979172019-03-10T19:17:21.866-07:002019-03-10T19:17:21.866-07:00Hey. You've gotten over your fear of impermane...Hey. You've gotten over your fear of impermanence. In fact, you've embraced it. And the net result? Magic.Thoughts in Glass Bottleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277904695744505012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-65571206316443820582019-03-10T16:32:26.061-07:002019-03-10T16:32:26.061-07:00This is a poem that encourages interrogation and i...This is a poem that encourages interrogation and imagination--are the words being taken those given? Those repeated without use? Whose fairy tale went bad? C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-43175594280765288052019-03-10T12:49:43.133-07:002019-03-10T12:49:43.133-07:00This is so filled with questions, most of them tha...This is so filled with questions, most of them that I think has no real answers... maybe there will be just more questions coming.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-76926459373672328042019-03-10T12:05:02.414-07:002019-03-10T12:05:02.414-07:00I'm intrigued. So much coming and going and g...I'm intrigued. So much coming and going and going. Every ending is a new beginning that ends up where it started. But we don't know as it unfolds. colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-32826051800728268062019-03-10T11:45:05.937-07:002019-03-10T11:45:05.937-07:00Seems like a time of sadness. I don't think th...Seems like a time of sadness. I don't think the memory will EVER fade, and such an extreme loss will stay with a person forever. Your poem was very moving!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-92228595219276066272019-03-10T11:35:11.981-07:002019-03-10T11:35:11.981-07:00Hard to find the right words when someone is headi...Hard to find the right words when someone is heading in a new direction. Very poignant, Suyash. A sad moment, well captured.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-2022164397548817352019-03-10T11:24:23.119-07:002019-03-10T11:24:23.119-07:00Such an evocative close on this one, Suyash!❤️ I w...Such an evocative close on this one, Suyash!❤️ I wonder if our words and emotions truly reach the other person?Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003371169461086077.post-34970450371756320972019-03-10T11:21:13.630-07:002019-03-10T11:21:13.630-07:00The ending has a twist and makes me wonder if word...The ending has a twist and makes me wonder if words are enough to reach the intended person. The image of packing words into a suitcase seems to say so much.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com